Wednesday, July 20, 2011

How to better word this clustered up sentence? (Writing help, please +10PointsBEST/ANSWER ASAP/thmbs + Points)?

During the six months' operation of Pearl Limousine, the demand for luxury transportation began to increase. To meet these demands, within a four-year span, we acquired a total of four limousines and two town cars.

No comments:

Post a Comment