Friday, July 15, 2011

How to better word this clustered up sentence? (Writing help, please +10PointsBEST/ANSWER ASAP/thmbs + Points)?

Wanting to grow my business, I purchased a limousine and started a new luxury transportation company, Pearl Limousine. After completing the financing, I had to go through the extensive, thorough licensing process of the California Public Utilities Commission (CPUC).

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