Thursday, July 14, 2011

How to better word this clustered up sentence? (Writing help, please +10PointsBEST/ANSWER ASAP/thmbs + Points)?

After six months of operation—in order to continue providing for the ongoing demand of our luxury transportation service at Pearl Limousine—more vehicles through the years gradually began to line up. Within a four year span, there were a total of four limousines and two town cars.

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